Sunday, November 9, 2008
She crackled with laughter as she went up in the air. Her long curly strands dancing with joy. Her lips curled to bring out her biggest smile. For him. The most beautiful smile.
Eyes shut. She felt her father’s soft push sending her 8 years old self, soaring on the red swing. Soaring. Her new word for the day. The red swing. Her favorite corner of the community park. She could see Jaya auntie’s balcony as she went high. Pigeons around the water bowl. She felt the chilly air fill her lungs. Burst of energy.
He saw her uninhibited and happy for the first time. Saw the bubbling bursting child. For the first time in a year of knowing her. He saw her forgetting the complicacies of the daily life. He would wait for her to get sated and come back to him. Will untangle her tousled hair. She would laugh at his obvious display of affection. But it won’t matter, because she would try to absorb every sensation, as his fingers move along her hair. What he calls the strands of crazy.
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8 comments:
first of all, i m glad u r back... missed u, amu...
ok abt the post...wow!! real good one... u kno wat i love abt this? it makes me imagine... it has multiple meanings, multiple continuations... keep posting!!
amu
so nice to have u back! and back with what!! amazing post...i can see the swing, the tousled hair, hear the laughter, the two 'he's in the story....fresh and vibrant...i'd say ur best so far :)
surprise!! :)
http://mywordshop.blogspot.com/2008/11/flutter-byes.html
you know what's great about your stories? They are very open...and in some weird sense, very free, almost like someone is thinking out loud :)
really nice, that is
late comment.
Free.. that's what the writing is. free from ridiculous conventions of the written word. a refreshing change.
keep up the good work even when far apart!
hi,
liked your blog too...
saw u have left a comment on my blog too... thanks a bunch for that.
But I am a little curious as to who exactly u r... i know one junior in my university by that name...
Are you her? Would love some disclosure :)
@ the mind bedouin and vrinda
am glad you enjoyed..just one of those things that come back to me..
and thanks for the award, vrinda.
@ crumbs
at times when my head is about to explode opening it the only way out. glad to know it gives you such joy.
@ sonal
keeping myself whole..that is your job!
@ asmita
Thanks..i am amu.
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